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  • #2061

    Newbold
    Participant

    Serra Cobblerstage1
    stage2

    working on a character commission for Scott Weldon of his character Serra Cobbler. I sent him the sketches first and he picked B. I then worked that up a little more trying to make it look like she’s walking instead of being a stone pillar in the road with a horse.

  • #2065

    Steel
    Participant

    You just started on this and I’m already IMPRESSED!!!

  • #2070

    Newbold
    Participant

    Thanks Steel!
    I’ll post some more pics as I progress

  • #2078

    Steel
    Participant

    I’ll be waiting. 🙂

  • #2085

    Brett Barkley
    Keymaster

    Hey Newbold!

    Great to see you posting stuff you’re working on. No art problems, man–just opportunities for improvement!

    Ok, it may be late in the process for you, but I’ve attached a few ideas here and I’ll try to explain. One of the reasons I force myself to do gesture work with a carpenter pencil, or just as generally as messy as I can, is so I force myself to focus on framing, general poses and the composition of the image right then…and only then. If you break the art down in phases, you get that out of the way in this phase, then you’re free to focus on anatomy, then details…generally in that order for me. Your gestural stuff in the first image looks great. Here’s what I see in the last image (it’s just my thoughts–we all approach things differently):

    I think you did great with working on her posing. She doesn’t feel as stiff as she did in the earlier image, but you have a ton of vertical axis lines, with the sword being the one that REALLY stands out. I don’t know if you’ve ever done anything with sculpture, but (depending on what you’re doing) you start out with a block. It’s not the final form —the final form is INSIDE that block.I think that’s the key to composition. You make the general block that serve as the boundary for the forms you’re focused on. This way you’re able to have everything where you want it on the page. Some stuff seems too close to the edge of the paper, particularly since they’re often strong axis lines. I’ve also blocked out the page in the rule of thirds. I don’t think this something you have to adhere to strictly, but I think it can really help.

    And this is generally what I’ve come up with.

    I composed the key forms, which as far as I can tell are the girl and the horse. It kind of bothered me not seeing the horse’s face, almost like it was shy. I thought about this a lot. I know the girl is the focus, but maybe sometimes the things we do around the focus (revealing half the face of a person or animal) reads in a way that can undercut what we’re trying to do with the main character. So I show both the girl and the horse. I lowered the vanishing point in order to give her more power. And I added a lot of dark toward the lower part of the image, to give it weight. This is also a nice juxtaposition for having her head rising above or out of the trees in the background. So she gets the power and focus she should have.

    I hope you don’t mind me uploading some thoughts, but I thought it could give you some things to consider or utilize when you’re composing your pieces.

    Best of luck!
    -B

  • #2089

    Newbold
    Participant

    I love this and I’m going to use some of your suggestions as I finish this up. My photo is a bad crop so it shows things closer to the edge than they are. I really like how you lowered the HL to give it some more drama. This is exactly what I am hoping to get from here – some solid critiques – so please people reading/vewing this feel free to chime in, I have thick skin and I don’t take art critiques personally.

    Here’s some stages of inking-each one is a quick sit down-not that this is how I work always just picking away at this as time allows
    inks stage 1
    stage2
    stage3
    stage4

  • #2094

    Newbold
    Participant

    tones

    • #2097

      Steel
      Participant

      WOW! THAT’S BEAUTIFUL!!!

  • #2114

    Newbold
    Participant

    Thanks man! I had a ton of fun with the markers on this one!

  • #2117

    Newbold
    Participant

    The Silver Bullet

    I was not happy with last weeks sketch but I was unable to dedicate more time then. I have worked on a new sketch purely for my satisfaction and to let BWOOD know that I’m giving your character the attention it deserves with this one.

  • #2129

    Newbold
    Participant

    SB tones

  • #2154

    bwood
    Participant

    awesome Silver Bullet!!!

  • #2230

    Newbold
    Participant

    RobotpetRobot pet2
    Robot viking
    *sorry posted this from my phone and couldn’t tell if it worked or not because it was loading for so long with my zero signal. Thanks Brett!! I had a lot of fun drawing him and reading through some old Silver Bullet!

    • #2232

      Steel
      Participant

      JEEZ! It looks like you’ve been hard at work!!!

  • #2246

    Newbold
    Participant

    thanks! I got too caught up in the concepting to get anything done for that clash.

    here’s some work on this weeks batman

    batman

    giving myself a time limit

    This was almost 1.5 hrs but my daughter got up a little early cause she’s excited for a field trip
    bats1.5

    • #2253

      Steel
      Participant

      Impressive, most impressive.

  • #2263

    Newbold
    Participant

    Batman finish
    I wanted to update this with the final

  • #2461

    Newbold
    Participant

    Wasps

    Some character dev for one of the stories I’m working on.

  • #2500

    Steel
    Participant

    This is very cool. What’s the story you’re doing?

  • #2516

    Newbold
    Participant

    its a bug with a shotgun!!

    or title tbd

    it’s a back up story for the Lords of the Cosmos- think darker Masters of the Universe plus epicness and you are getting close.
    I’ve done a short character story for each issue.
    This is the 3rd and each one is more fun and crazy cool like the last ones have been.
    here’s some process from layout to loose pencil
    layout

    pencil
    stry
    2

    those are pgs from the last story I did, Mindozer, for issue 2

  • #2736

    Brett Barkley
    Keymaster

    Newbold! I love seeing your sequential pages. There’s some great stuff here. I want to try to give some actual thoughts, but while I’m on deadline, it’s tough to do much. But the character designs and camera angles are awesome! And I love the way you create depth with your hatching.
    Great stuff, man!

    -B

  • #2737

    Brett Barkley
    Keymaster

    Newbold! I love seeing your sequential pages. There’s some great stuff here. I want to try to give some actual thoughts, but while I’m on deadline, it’s tough to do much. But the character designs and camera angles are awesome! And I love the way you create depth with your hatching.
    Great stuff, man!

    -B

  • #2810

    Steel
    Participant

    I love the creativity! I come here and I see tons of creativity!

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